by TemptressWicked
HOT? or Implausable?
If this is your first effort, as it appears to be, then maybe it is both.
Don't stop with this one, let's see more.
Mysterious woman,
Thanx for the story. You should keep it up (in every sense)
Oh, he is so damn lucky! Hope this delicious story is all based on events you have been fortunate enough to experience! If not then you have one wonderful imagination. But no matter what keep them cumin!
to little to soon. You need to build your story and develop interest. your like a kid grabbing at the cookie jar. keep trying.