All Comments on 'Lovely Lisa'

You paint an amazing picture with your words.... Its almost like one can feel your fingers on their flesh... And to praise and admire a BBW that way.... Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

The author obviously has some talent, but brevity is the chief fault of this story. There is no real introduction to the characters, much less character development, no preliminary build up in the story, and the love scene is also much too short. This is a story that should have been much better.