by dreamer1000
dont listen to theese jerks keep writing in hindi there r very few authors who r as good as u who can write in hindi and english as good as you i would like to read a full hindi story from u.
very nice dost, but translate the hindi dialogue in brackets for the non hindi speakers. well written keep going.
in any language. Your story progressed well, with the second half being so much stronger than the first half. Please keep writing and you'll get much better. Thanks.
very, very good work. the story is believeable, and that's really great. many authors write, but not convincingly, that's why the reader would loose interest in reading. here the author tells in such a way that you begin to believe it could really take place like that. may be in our lives too...
विभू is lucky guy to get knowledge of sex properly from his aunt. The Ass of ladies in thirties are so full and the craving for sex is always high. Aunt was expecting real good fucking from him so she slowly made him hers.
Nee knowledge is nipples are for biting and sucking. Thanks for the hot story.
Add hairy armpits and also ass fucking.