by Nightchild27
I literally have been waiting all day for this. Worth it, of course. But oh lord, I hate that it ended so quickly! NEED THE NEXT ONE ALREADY.
A good chapter, but it raises some question:
Ashley wants Erin to get any guy?
Or does she know that her father and Erin are in romance and want to push her fast?
I have the feeling that Ashley knows more than she seems.
5 * for you and waiting for the next chapter for soon.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Even through all the grammatical errors (think quality control), occasional tense mix-ups and unnecessary minutiae of action (if Ashley motioned for Erin to enter the dining room you don't have to state that she walked in). Will look forward to chapter #5.