All Comments on 'Loving My Best Friend's Dad Ch. 04'

by Nightchild27

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
TORTURE

I literally have been waiting all day for this. Worth it, of course. But oh lord, I hate that it ended so quickly! NEED THE NEXT ONE ALREADY.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hurry Up..........

This was so good but you update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
QUICK!

Pleaaaaaase l!!! I can't wait 7 more days 😢so good!

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticabout 7 years ago
A good chapter

A good chapter, but it raises some question:

Ashley wants Erin to get any guy?

Or does she know that her father and Erin are in romance and want to push her fast?

I have the feeling that Ashley knows more than she seems.

5 * for you and waiting for the next chapter for soon.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

trigudistrigudisabout 7 years ago
Somehow, you've managed to keep my interest..

Even through all the grammatical errors (think quality control), occasional tense mix-ups and unnecessary minutiae of action (if Ashley motioned for Erin to enter the dining room you don't have to state that she walked in). Will look forward to chapter #5.

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