Lucky at Summer Ch. 04

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As promised, Mike was offered a job. He, too, could claim one of Abby's cabins for the same arrangement as Amanda enjoyed. He was welcome to join Amanda at community college and was to share use of the pickup in a manner the two of them determined.

Things had moved fast for Mike. The job opportunity, the chance to stay close to Amanda, his aunt's engagement, it was all so exciting and full of promise. He was just the slightest bit hesitant when he picked up the phone to call his mother.

She wouldn't be expecting the news and, as much as he liked his life at the moment, he missed her. As the phone was ringing, he hoped he wouldn't disappoint her.

"Hello."

"Hi Mom, it's me." Mike breathed deeply. "I'm thinking about staying the winter."

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fisheronefisheroneabout 2 years ago

I think you left story uncompleted. Let mom's opinion be heard and Amanda and Mike's relationship blossom to become partners.

alo0ozalo0ozabout 4 years ago
no no no

it was a very good series to read until it went downright bothering. what was wrong with them together

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sabout 5 years ago
Went to shit fast

Sorry but the first part with Molly and the tape and the following scene with Mike destroyed any interest in Molly as a character and the trip to.se Connie was a big pile of don't give a fuck and you finished off the only character left Amanda by her getting fucked by every cowboy when mike wasn't around. Her admission of i enjoy you the most line was something only a whore would say. Mike was being fucked by tired old whores and the only person who he liked or liked him was getting fucked by every other guy in Wyoming. 1 star and waste of time. Felt sorry for mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I really enjoyed your story, and I like your writing style.

I'll continue to look for more from you.

OlebillOlebillalmost 8 years ago
Ok

Was fine in beginning but too many people then Amanda just didn't know where to go but was disappointed from ch3 onwards.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Finish the fucking story

If you start something at least finish it fuck head.

startenovr43startenovr43almost 11 years ago
need more cpters

Need to move more into the story pls

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Give a little warning

The first 3 were OK; started pretty good, but kept going downhill, but when I got to the 4th and the whip [OK, "switch"] came out I started skipping, then it was a black guy, then she wanted a rape, and finally it had to be anal...I quit there. I don't know if you got to homosexual, or showers, golden or brown, or what else, and I know there are readers that like those, but there are those who like necrophilia, also. I'm not letting my preferences affect your score, so I didn't give you a 1, but you managed to hit on 4 of my top dislikes and I wasn't through the first page. Write what people want, but let them know what you're doing. "Conclusion" isn't the term for "I'm going to be throwing in a bunch of other stuff now." PS Not hiding my name; I'm not registered.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I be from Wyoming

I must agree that the swinging kind of messed it up somewhat... It being I live in the Great State of Wyoming... was this in the north Star Valley/south of Jackson area?? If it was Star Valley... that means it was among all them Mormans...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
what could have been

it started out great but somehow the swinging part just messed it up.

Better luck next time just dont add no more willing cuckold

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