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- Lucky Guy Pt. 08
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Eva said, "Okay, I think a shower would feel good."
Eva's eyes opened and she slowly got out of my lap. I lead her to the gym with Rock, Chocolate, and Little One following. Denise had seen us and got ahead of us. We showered together. It was clear that Denise had been fucked hard by someone and joined us in the shower. We dried each other off. As we did the crowd was coming into the gym as I was sure Angela had directed.
Again, Denise gave us Samford tee-shirts, our clothes in a bag and shoes to put on.
We joined Angela and Stanley at the entrance. Angela said to Rock, "You know I regret you didn't get to fuck me. I saw what you did to Eva and I am jealous."
"Lady, I am here anytime you want. You throw one hell of a party. If you are ever in Lafayette call me." Rock then gave her his phone number.
Angela said, "Young man, I am going to do that. You and your entourage know how to have a good time."
"Yes mam, we do. Don't we Chocolate and Little One?"
Chocolate and Little One nodded yes.
Angela said, "I want you to bring your crew to lunch tomorrow at one. I will have the limo take you all to the airport."
I said, "Sounds good."
Eva and I, hugged everyone as they left, told them how much we enjoyed our party and thanked them for coming.
Denise, Rock, Chocolate, Little One, John, Emma, Edgar, Annie, Eva and I shared the limo. We had lunch with Angela and Stanley before heading back to Cincinnati.
The following week Emma had a month off before going back for summer classes. She and John got engaged before we headed to the Caribbean for our wedding.
This is where I am going to end my story. I am sure you will agree that I am a very lucky man.
- COMMENTS
Gym526 months agoEXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Sorry but unfortunately I am unable to award any further stars or accolades.
Thank you for bringing this beautiful work to us, you have developed an unusual premise into a story of note, one point that I must raise, this may be from the difference between the UK and American versions of the English language but a dominant (noun), dominates (verb) a submissive.
I can understand why you have decided to finish at this point, it is a natural closure, but a nice sequel would be the romance between John and Emma, including their contemporaries.
Thank you for publishing this brilliant work here.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYou have done such a wonderful job with this story, it is almost a shame to end it. A compromise could be stories of Emma and Joe and how they continue in this lifestyle.
666icemanover 7 years agoSlimpic first I want to say what a wonderful story you have put together, with the characters becoming real friends with the readers. Leaving us all awaiting more of the same. I agree that it is right to end this story here, yet as others say there leaves many spin off stories for all characters to be used as they follow their own lives as well as the occasional meeting of families and friends. I am sorry about that suggestion as it would mean a hell of a lot of work and pressure on you my friend. You are a prolific writer and it is up to you alone on what and where you may go, with our hopes and fears. Hopes that you continue, Fears that you end it all here and now. Please consider what you do with our thoughts in mind. That is all I ask. This story has made me agree he is sure one Lucky Guy. There again I am a Lucky Guy as I have my own lovely wife. You are one Fantastic writer and await your next post. Happy New Year to you.
drose63over 7 years agoI think it was a perfect place to end the story. You can always do side stories on the other couples.
FieroGT1988over 7 years agoFirst I think i speak for a lot of the readers when i say I want to hear about the wedding. Maybe an attempt to keep it staid and proper for the locals and how it gets out of hand latter in the evening? second. please keep them going with a possible split for the younger members both at work and at college. As Always it is your story tell it how you want, we will enjoy it no matter which way you decide to go with it. Keep on typing.
