All Comments on 'Lucy'

If this story gets good feedback I may right a sequel. Please share your opinions on my work, constructive criticism would be welcome so that if I do write a sequel I can make it better than this! 😊

what's the point of the glory hole?

The point of the glory hole will be revealed in the sequel, which I have decided to start writing.

Poorly written story. It's over before it started. And the fact that she was drugged and was not into it, doesn't make it enjoyable. That is RAPE!

1) It's a story so if it's rape it doesn't matter.

2)This is the NON CONSENT/reluctance section not just the reluctance section, not all stories have to have a person change their mind and get into the sex!

This was so stupid. The gloryhoke had no purpose, and it's only a paragraph long....

This kind of crosses the line between reluctance and flat out rape. I'm just saying.

it sucks