A happy birthday to you - and many happy returns, as they say! A very enjoyable, well-written story - well done, thank you, and please have four stars for a most entertaining read.
Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...