All Comments on 'Luke and Amy Ch. 09'

Thank you for another amazing chapter!

Your writing skills are superb as always. I anxiously await the next chapter!

~ Psyris

I've been saving up for the new "L & A"... love getting off to them!! Hope you'll continue with them going shopping for sexy clothes for her, public sex, Amy fucking another guy ( Matthew or Ethan?) with Luke there, maybe even Amy being gang- banged by Luke's friends! Thnx for your hot work!!

Totally awesome chapter. I will never complain about such great chapters being to long. I love them that way! You can feel the love of the main characters. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^

Luke and Amy are always good. Hope you consider. R and J, yet I know you're busy with this. C baby

log wait was worth it. ty for sharing w/us this great story your telling so well., ty /bill

Miss goody two shoes is the best writer, and this is the best series on lit. full of dirty sex, fun, humor, and yes love. Its a fabulous story in every way. TJ

Three Cheers for GoodyGoodyTwoShoes, you have gone and done it again. You have brought us another delightfully sinful and yummy chapter that had just as much love, caring, and passion as it did hot and wild sex! I know I'm not the only one that was worried when your update didn't follow your normal pattern. Now I understand why...you blessed us with 12 pages this time. No wonder it took you longer to write. With every chapter of Luke and Amy I find myself falling deeper and deeper under your spell. This MUST read for anyone who likes this genre!

Amazing writing as always!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Your stories are wonderful I can't wait for the next chapter I hope you make the next chapter even better than this 1 And if I could I would rate this story 10 stars but 5 will have to do I hope that's okay with you.

long wait but it was absolutely worth it!

I'd say it's about a 3 as compared to ch. 8. The 8th one blew me clear outta the water. I'm not liking the sharing thing as well. They're too close to be doing that.

Once again, I love your story!! Still NOT a fan of the sharing Amy thing and I hope the sex remains with the two of them only, but Amy is such a seductress and her "just teasing" skills are fantastic, but what makes this story so great is the love between the two of them. This story is not just great erotica, but a great story as well! So I'd like to see the love scenes stay between the two of them. Its great the way you make them really come alive. We can definitely tell they are truly in love. Just please don't ruin it with multiple partners. thanks for another great chapter of my Number One favorite story on this site!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter and their visit to Montreal!!! THANK YOU and keep up the great work!!!!

I'm loving this story. The only thing is the whole Amy fooling around. And whats worse is you keep having her do it but then you don't balance it with Luke fooling around too. I all honesty I would rather it be just Luke with Amy only but its not my story. I was enjoying this chapter alot til cousin matthew at the end. I had to skip the ending because of it.

Miss Goody Two Shoes has created a masterpiece with the Luke and Amy series, crafted out of wonderful writing, likable characters, attention to and layering of detail that makes everything feel real, and a writing style that brings the characters to life. This is a story of true love and lust, and it fuels our own lust as we read it. Some are concerned that Amy likes other men as well, but it’s a story where Luke has aroused the slut deep within her and given her the freedom to embrace that side of her within their loving relationship. She has the best of worlds, love and security with her brother, and lust and excitement while watched over and protected by her big brother. Enjoy it for what it is, a deeply moving story of love and a wonderfully arousing story of lust. My hat is off to the talented writer that crafts such artistic and arousing stories. Rogue

Keep the story's comeing this is a fantastic story I'll never get tired of

grt story..

bt luke 's willingness to shre her so often doesnt go along well wid me..

wud hv loved to c him as a possessive lover!!

i love how they tease other people. keep it up

IN my book you are with out a doubt the best author on litrotica today .

this story has no ending chapter nine had it and more. with the love of a brother and sister , forbidden but beautiful do keep them cumming its out standing.

both the story as well as the writing love it to bits.

pleaseee continue this series. I squirt to these stories every time I read them ;)

Please keep the story going. It is one of the best I've read.

I'm dying waiting for the next chapter! I've read through the series multiple times waiting for Chapter 10.

Doing a great job, by the way. Been reading since the beginning.

That can't be all of it. We want more please!!

its a Prince of Wales check on the suit you are thinking off.

good story hope to read more soon

This series is truly amazing, I can't stop reading it!

Please keep up the great work and who cares about a few errors here and there

when the detail in the story is so in depth!

Can't wait for the next installments :)

A lot of naughty things happen at wedding receptions, and after--Amy was it top form, wasn't she? Wow, it is hot in here, isn't it?

GGTS does it again. Yet another erotic chapter in the life of siblings. Looking forward to their spring break trip--and afterwards. I think the best is yet to cum.

You have to continue this story. I've already read it twice and cannot stop getting hard when reading. The story might be about siblings but I see a story of 2 people that love each other and won't do anything to hurt each other. Just have a look at Amy and how she seeks Luke's approval for playing with their cousin and how she wouldn't be with another man unless Luke was there.

I'm hoping your next chapter matches what I've imagined Luke and Amy get up to next.

Hmmm what about bring Amy's friend into the fun? That could be fun for Luke and Amy. So far its just been Amy experiencing 2 guys at once. Amy could surprise Luke and rock his world.

Just some suggestions.

Keep up the good work.

God I love this series you cannot stop there so much more Luke & Amy can do, please keep them coming. I love the balance of the story it draws you in so much you can feel each and every emotion its had me laugh think and cry. Its more than an erotic story its a true love story that deserves publishing.

Fantastic keep up the good work cant wait for more i may have to start from the begining again.

There's just one thing that is interfering with my ability to suspend my disbelief. Can Amy's friend really be so clueless that she can't tell the difference in her best friend between a girl who's been dumped by her boyfriend (bad call there, dude!), and a girl who is head over heals in love with someone and having her sexual needs completely filled? I just don't think that's something she could hide from a confidante who knew her well.

Is worthless and distracting. It would be a much better story without him

This story has totally turned into a cuckold story

First Ethan and now Matthew? Yeah, involving others in a story that was clearly built up as incest romance is dumb as fuck. Especially when there is constant peppering of declarations of love and "you complete me" sentiments. When you share the sister it shits all over that. Objectively the scenes are hot but it doesn't gel with the theme that was set up. At least she hasn't fucked anyone else; that would just completely ruin it, although the fact that she's already did some stuff and worse, the brother is all for it (sounds a bit like a cuck to me), isn't great.