All Comments on 'Luminescent Ch. 01-02'

and different...than what i would normally read but glad i did...thank you for sharing and welcome to Literotia. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I think this is one of the best stories on literotica. It has interesting chracters and a good plot that builds up at a good pace, not to quick and not to slow. So i hope i get to read another chapter soon.

amazing story errr guess you didnt get enough feedback or something great story i liked it. maybr some day err you make more :\ well hope whatever your doing is going good.