All Comments on 'Luna vs. Everyone Ch. 02'

This had been a long time in cumming! Heehee, little joke, but honestly loved every minute of it. I do kinda wish the chapters could be longer though, and also, get some of Luna's family in on it. After all, it is titled "Vs. Everyone", so in retrospect, I think either a sibling of hers, or her parents should get a turn.

Stories are too short

In many of these lovely Luna stories she has pictures and sometimes even videos take of her.

To me the amount of recordings made by her rival and "friends" seems to be something that could be used in a future story.

Sincerely,

An avid reader

I enjoy your Luna stories. Please continue