All Comments on 'Lunch Break'

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peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
The story line was good and so is the writing

It was a good very short story of lust and passion going wild for a husband and wife. The writing is a bit different and good<P>Thanks for the entertainment and please keep writing<P>PT

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 16 years ago
Nice!

This is what marriage should be like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Very good, Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The tops of stories

After reading this, I asked my wife too, she is not into this but we both laughed and enjoyed it together. We do this but sneak off for a weekend get away or a few times a lunch get together and it spices up our marriage. couples should try it. This story is not about cheating, infidelity or cockolding which is awesome, just a story about a husband and wife acting out a mystery of sorts. Very well done 5 stars and the best in the website...

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Not in the can

A real loving wife and husband surprise.

SyzyguySyzyguyalmost 2 years ago

Neat idea, quick and humorous - a lovely little story. Thank you for posting it.

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