All Comments on 'Lunch Date Love'

A good realistic story. Great job

It's a sweet story with a nice payoff at the end. I don't want to see another chapter because it will either be more of the same (nice, but once is enough) or there has to be conflict to move the story (and I'd rather just imagine they rude off into the sunset myself). I truly enjoyed this sweet romp.

nice tale

Romantic, fun, and keep writing.

This was a very nice story. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent story the kind that makes you say it could really happen. Please keep writing.

This type of story line reminds me that there are some folks can actually "author" a story by putting the different feelings and all the simple pieces & parts into it without over doing it. Gives us, the various readers, a chance to enjoy an almost purity of it and the lack of bdsm, cheating whores, swearing like sailors (I'm a retired one of those). In the case of this story, the opportunity of calling on or expanding a very simple work friendship to minimize an impending work related social difficulty probably happens in reality, many of the participants are like our beloved female character here and loath the situations but with all of this written so succinctly and smoothly it reads very well. BRAVO!!!!

This was a great story. I don't want to repeat what others have already said but, yes, this was a sweet and loving story. Too often do Lit authors introduce too many characters or add too much drama. This was simple and sweet. Enjoyable to read, and it leaves you with a warm, happy and fuzzy feeling.

Thanks for writing.

Nice to hear a good romantic 'love at first sight' story from a male perspective instead of the female. Two spelling errors: it's senor with the mark over the n, not senior with the mark over the n and "clothes" not "cloithes"

Great work!

Ah, those heady days of first meetings when opposites attract and it's difficult to think about anyone or anything else. Well captured here and ignore the few errors. Two star-crossed lovers finish where they belong: coupled in each other's arms, sated by their initial physical experience and looking hopefully ahead for even greater moments.

Nice story. I hope there is as sequel being written.

George in Omaha

The only thing that bothered me was him not using a condom. Other than that a hot story.

A very nice Erotic Coupling story. Lose a star for the wrong category...4 stars or 5 for the right category...I do see a very big potential for Romance here, author you didn't finish the story to make it a romance...Great writing BTW...

Wished it was longer! Fell in love with characters and could have kept reading about them! It's how they are that is so sweet and made it a 'romance ' category for me. Thanks so much for the little gem!