All Comments on 'Lunch Date Reveal (S. Lancaster)'

You set up a great scenario, then missed the middle of the story entirely - how Stacy gets through the afternoon once aware of her brainless morning state and does she come to terms with Jared's opinion being brainless at work turned her on - and then rushed through what should have been the grand finale in one paragraph.

From the way the start went I expected better.

Great start & OK, if short, ending. What's missing is the internal conflict of the knowledge that she was exposed and having to run the meeting in front of everyone. Please consider a rewrite!

Like the story but hard to imagine a woman accidentally forgetting her bra. Superior writing. I'd love to see the rest of the work day.