All Comments on 'Lustful Energy Ep. 02'

She was imprisoned for a reason. It feels too much like some crazy scheme. Still intriguing though

I am not sure if you're intentionally just teasing the reader before you let us on the the pertinent detail and what is happening with the characters and the world you are building (which would be great) but if not, I am left wanting more. Just a little more depth in the development of your characters because the basis of what you have good, respectively me two cents.

That was supposed to say respectfully my two cents, auto correct is a harsh mistress