All Comments on 'Lustful Thinga!'

Some of the writing was off and you really need to be more careful with details- I found myself so confused during some parts, like the first sex scene when he changes Mia to be young- you never said that it was HER she saw and corrected her from thinking it was a different girl. But the idea was nice, the girls getting their dreams. Overall, pretty good. Keep it up.

The story is really called, Lustful Things, but somewhere, the name got changed by the site during posting. Plus, it's old people.

L.A.Wicker.