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Click here"Oh little mama, you are the only woman I ever think about, even if you didn't have jaws like a little Hoover vacuum. You are an amazing little lover, you know that," he added dotingly tickling her chin dimple with loving fingers.
Lynne giggled with joy.
"I'm glad that I was able to put my practicing to good use," she murmured sweetly.
"Hell yeah. I'm gonna practice for you now. Gonna hold my breath while I suck a peach," he added playfully.
Lynne giggled hysterically, at their shared tender humor.
"What, I am! I want to be just as good an oral lover as you are princess," said Leif playfully.
"Well you are, and you have great stamina, and you can keep going with your tongue for hours, no need to hold your breath," she added overcome with more laughter.
And then she very sweetly cradled into his neck, her eyes closed, resting with peaceful, trusting security as she waited for the storm to pass so they could continue driving.
He smelled the sweet almond scent of her hair, and it was such a marvelous feeling, the love and trust between them. He almost didn't know how they'd make it to the cottage. He felt that itch to fuck her again, hard and nasty and her eager deep-throated worship of his cock hadn't helped matters.
The rain finally abated.
"Let's go the last leg up the mountain to the cottage, otherwise, I might fuck you right in this car, and we'll probably turn this little Prius over on its side" joked Leif.
"Awesome, I can't wait, until we get there, I've got so many more lessons I want to learn from you about being dirty, and fucking," said Lynne.
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- COMMENTS
Loca85almost 9 years agoI went back and read the first chapter. You used to be more concise. Stop repeating yourself. Even if the feeling is that they're so in love the feelings are overwhelming and then they have to repeat themselves to get the words out, it's still too much. Use it sporadically.
This is constructive, because I'm still here after 50+ chapters. You are a good writer, you just need a lesson in brevity :)
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoShe wiped off her make up.... but then her face looked ravaged lipstick smeared everywhere... thank you
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYour writing has improved immeasurably. I was wary of reading this instalment because of the usually unnecessary tendency towards over explanation and repetition but this was way better. A good editor would still help to reduce the desire to overexplain things the reader already knows. One final point is to please resist the overuse of the same types of adjectives/adjectival clauses around the words, nasty, doting and tender. There are heaps more words in the English language! Well done though. This chapter was great!
