All Comments on 'Maddie's Time Alone'

Curiosity took me to this not knowing what it would be about, thought it was great hopefully can be built on with further chapters with Dirty Dirty Maddie being watched by another passing woman

what the fella below doesn't know about shit, streams and drinking water won't kill him.

Intriguing tale. I was wondering why she needed panties to go to the river but you did a great job of making sense. That's a nice piece of work, holding the reader in suspense.

Waiting for the next chapter, in which Mucky Maddie wakes up with a delightful case of bacterial vaginosis, goes down to the river and attracts a big old bear who thinks he's stumbled upon a major salmon run and proceeds to rip her a new ass and pussy.

How's that for oral sex.

Finally a nice story that has great potential for maybe some more chapters? Thank you for posting!

Oh please please please give us more!

I loved it.Any story with female piss and poop gets me wanking all the way through.

Terrific.!!