All Comments on 'Maestro Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You need to mix up your writing style. Read through it yourself and see how many paragraphs start with "Katie". Katie did this. Katie did that. Personally I think piercing is out of hand, and maybe you should move this to nonconsent/reluctance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This 'master' progressed too far too fast with a new submissive. "no safewords" or not, he is irresponsible and loses control of himself too easily.

PallasAthena123PallasAthena123over 7 years ago

I was surprised Maestro gave in to her request. I'm holding out hope that he hasn't actually pierced her, and decided to do this session to scare her and demonstrate WHY she shouldn't go asking near strangers for no-safe-word play

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I have to agree

Little in this chapter rang true with me. For one thing, why was she panicking over being a few hours late to work? One time in 5 years of 90+ hours per week with no time off? She's already a slave--only no orgasms! Katie is in a very dangerous state of mind. Her job sucks and is dragging her down. Her entire support system is gone; everyone wants her to become a baby factory. In her desperation, she turns to the sadist who only thinks of the turn-on he'll get.

Maestro is so wrong in this chapter--totally irresponsible. He should tell her not only no but HELL NO. He has alternatives (refer her to a trusted Dom who accepts subs on a part-time basis or tell her about local clubs or anything other than what he did). Let's hope he did not go extreme.

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Hard to Believe Maestro Would Go This Far and No Safeword Too.

Katie is not reluctant but has certainly given consent. I too hope that Maestro has not pierced her as it is too far too fast. I never thought he would agree to no safeword. I am hoping he is trying to scare her to bring her to what is safe and what is not. I do not believe Maestro is a sadist due to the way he treated her the first time. I think he is trying to prove a point that safewords are always necessary. It is a shame she is cut off from everyone and now can only orgasm with Maestro, but I suspect that too will pass. Kevin was a pain and would not take no for an answer and he really did need to be told but she should not have used her friend or so called friend the way she did. She may be right in that she was not a true friend anyway.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Clamps?

I'm hoping that Maestro didn't really pierce her nipples or her clit but just put clamps on them to show her how irresponsible her "no safe word" demand was. Funny how every comment deals with him being irresponsible instead of thinking it might just be clamps and a way to show her the error in her thinking. I could be way off base but that is the first thing I thought of...not what everyone else did. *shrugs*

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