All Comments on 'Maggie Becomes My Whore Ch. 02'

1) I write and publish academic material, so I do this primarily to grease the wheels for other writing. I do edit, but I'm not going overboard as I have an "authorial life" beyond this website and I have other things to do with my time. If you want to nitpick, go elsewhere, 'cause frankly I don't give a shit. If it was approved, it's good enough for the editors, which means good enough for all of us. If someone with more enthusiasm would like to edit what I do, please contact me via email. I would love to look at someone else's work if I have time, or have them look at mine if they seem like a capable editor.

2) This story and others that I write are in fact real. Obviously I've changed some details: names are approximate; I might conflate several different sexual encounters for the sake of a story; and other details will be omitted. But yes, my wife is a "hot wife" and we have lots of fun, together and apart.

3) If you don't like my work then please don't read it. No need to be an asshole/bitch and flame people (either me or someone else) who are having fun sharing their experiences, real or imagined. I realize being an anonymous douche bag is now a national sport online, but this is a space to enjoy sexuality, not exorcise your keyboard demons. Save all your vitriol for Huffington Post; that's where it belongs.

Cheers,

Professor M

Dear Author,

I was okay with the story. It was your comment at the end that turned me off. It comes across a little too strong.

@ littlecordelera: Thanks. I appreciate the feedback about the comment. There are plenty of comment sections online where people--even anonymous users--are respectful, even when they disagree, but frequently that isn't the case here, and that turns me off even more...

I gave this story 5 Stars because I can recognise a lifelike scenario when I see one. This was very well written, and very Hot'n'Horny! I'm keen to see where this goes, it's good as is, but if improved upon will become a cuckold classic.

Fine that you like being a cuckold. But what's good for the goose is certainly even better for the gander.

You a WACC bitch.Get it.

I can't wait for the next chapter here! Very nice! I'm thrilled at how this is going! I'm kind of hoping that they all lose control someplace public! exciting and dangerous! Thank you a million times over and I hope to read you again soon!

Cheers!

The first chapter was great and this second installment was even better.

Very nice writing style, good build up, climax, and then the great unknown at the end...she is now out of control and really needing the other guy's cock. However; I'm guessing the husband is going to enjoy this! This will be the "new normal" for the relationship now. It is exciting because the husband is not longer in control; but, is certainly along for the ride!

This, in my mind, is what a lot of wives would enjoy: an occasional slut experience on the side with someone they know, rather than an anonymous bar pick up scene. My wife and I have been doing this for quite some time and it is exciting for both of us. How well I remember the day when I saw that look of desire in her eyes and knew she never wanted to stop!

There is nothing more exciting in the world than to see your own wife totally disheveled after passionate sex with another man.

Keep writing. Thanks!

I can barely wait for the next part!

You write that story very well, it's really good!

this could really be a fantastic story...... please hurry, we're salivating

I read both of your stories and enjoyed.

Hot and erotic.

My cock has been hard through both stories and I want more

More stories please

Thanks

Joe

damn, just cuntabidebyit!

The wife's sexy costumes are very enticing. I'd like her to submit to being bound and gagged.

Until a guy with a bigger/thicker cock comes along. Your protagonist is a classic fool who is playing with fire.

I enjoyed both of your stories and I hope you continue to write about these characters and their adventures.

JC

Your stories ring true and are incredibly hot. Thank you for sharing. Please write more of your experiences and lifestyle. I hope that you'll be an inspiration to others.

As a man who thoroughly enjoys watching other men have sex with his wife...and joining in on giving her (and ourselves) pleasure...I have enjoyed your stories. I kept hoping that your wife would tell her professor that you were in on everything and arranged for him to visit while you became a part of the action and her pleasure.

As for giving head...my wife has NO gag reflex and taking it all is the most enjoyable thing to watch.

Keep on writing about her experiences. Very Hot.

What a good pupil dear professor..

Please more....

This stories is very instesting, a letter difficult for the translation in French, but lovely nice. I put 5 stars. Think you

I'm glad you wrote a second installment, the story is getting. Dry interesting. There are lots of avenues to explore; threesomes, gang, public exposure and connection. Don't stop now!!

I would like to know more about how things turned out for you guys. My wife and I have had several fun adventures together, and so far it has gone very well for us, so I enjoy seeing similar couples stories. I hope you let us know more about your wife's adventures.

The worst. 1* !!

Please tell us more

If it's true, I am certain there has been many other adventures with your sexy wife. Being married to a beautiful and sexy woman myself, I know there is not a week that goes by without someone hitting on her. We have enjoyed a lot of fun over the years, both with her bosses, like you, and others. The good thing is she is bisexual and we also enjoy fun with her friends from time to time.

Excellent. More please.

Find another hobby, dickhead. "1*"!

When it comes to women, there are no rules that will not be broken. The true nature of woman dictates that it is never a matter of "if", but only "when". Rules only create a slippery slope that becomes too easy to slide down and impossible to resist the inexorable pull of gravity and concomitantly hedonistic, narcissistic sex.

Start down the slippery slope, and EVERY man will find himself betrayed, dumped and replaced/traded off.

God damn! Very hot stuff,

My cock was hard the whole time, hoping it will last...

Looking forward to reading more of this cock hardening story.

Even worse than your first story, very happy it was your last.

Nice job hubby, you just lost your wife. Probably why you haven't written anymore since you are still crying in your beer. Fool.