by leo12846
and start the long process of getting rid of the false 5's and dropping the score in the crapper where it belongs
What can we say? He was a serial cheater (worst, fucking unprotected not thinking that he could get a STD and pass it to his wife) and not even after his wife fulfilled his fantasy (and showed how open she was) he came clear about being bi and a sissy and have men lovers behind her back and that last night friend was one of those lovers. Is this a good marriage? Is this the way to respect and love his wife? Will she be happy when she finds out all the cheating? Or didn't he consider fucking other men behind her back, cheating? Too much issues that destroy completly this story...1*
Just to show that I'm not anti-woman, this guy is garbage and she should divorce his ass!
Within the first few paragraphs we learn the husband is a fag cuckhold. Gross. So I drop down and see that it is 4 pages. Really? 4 pages of fag cuckiness? What kind of shit does the author want me to wade through to read about a gross cuck queer? Then I go to the ratings and its 1.72 at that point. God bless the comment crowd. While a few single commenters get it right every time, the combined comments almost always give the best picture and rating of a story. 1.72? A blank page gets a higher rating!
So this is another pile of shit in need of a toilet. It earned every flush it got, including mine. And I didn't even need to waste my time on it.
But it was fun commenting. I hope it was fun writing. Gross.
Very hot and well-written. Three consenting adults enjoying each other and fulfilling a thrilling fantasy. 5*s. Keep writing.
story has a wife, but the preponderance of gay sexual activity kills it for the majority of normal readership. You will find a more receptive crowd in the other category. But if the low scores and scathing comments dont bother you, post on here and subject yourself to the brutal commentariat withinn
At least this author is openly gay and not repressed like the other writers.
Jerking away the whole time. Maggie is one wonderful woman. Bill & Paul good together too!
If you like to be fucked by men then change your crap to gay!!!
Well written and very erotic. Ignore the sexually insecure closeted assholes that have made comments. Evidently they didn't stop reading when they got to the "gay shit". More please! Loved it!
Consider yourself ignored ass wipe. People, if the word hot wife appears in the tags, move on. I've yet to read a hot wife story that's worth a shit. Written for perverts like the above anon.
And I agree with the AWESOME post from the earlier anonymous-awesome poster. Amazes me when faceless anonymous weasels apparently read a multipage story, and then post insults and do so repeatedly (mr anon 5/19 x5). Pitiful weird hobby to come into porn/erotica sites, to get your jollies by posting insults.
The whole gay stuff was a little much that didn't carry through to the end. Can't say that that part did anything but it was a nice ending.
The insecure liberal that keeps degrading and demeaning the people who like to read and write this type needs to man up.
Your little ISIS/Antifa tactics are lame. Man up and put a name and face to your attacks...
I'm bi and married and could only hope that this would happen for me. Loved it.
What woman would not enjoy two cocks for the night there would not be much sleeping. So she granted this cuck his wish and thoroughly enjoyed the pleasure just to please him
What a great story! I love how she is so aroused she doesn't argue, just goes with the feelings burning inside her. I look forward to more stories!