All Comments on 'Mailroom Girl'

Time to learn where it is anatomically, don't you think?

A pretty good story in most respects, but ruined by ignorance of geography. I know that they are rare, but why can't authors ask Mr. Google where the hymen is located. I just turn off when I encounter an author who hasn't bothered to check such a simple fact.

Not sure why so many authors want to let the man get part of his cock into the channel before encountering the hymen. Afraid he will miss if it is properly placed across the opening?

Dear Anonymous 1 and 2,

Thanks so much for reading, voting and commenting. ! I know the hymen is not a literal barrier one breaks through, but some of my doctor friends insist it's possible to break a hymen. I will definitely research it a bit more before the book is published. This is the first chapter of Mickey's adventures. There are more to come. Your critiques will always be welcomed.

Best,

Sofie

I don't expect the people who write these Stories to know everything ~~ but why do so many think they do.?

Very good story and a good read for her first story on here.! { 5 } all the way.

Keep on writing.

wolf/man

Great story for a first time fuck