All Comments on 'Making Daddy Happy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
When

writing a story, decide whether it is going to be present tense or past tense, first person or third person - and stick to it!!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 5 years ago
Not thrilled

Not thrilled about that surprise canning where he beats her for nothing. Just because he got a new cane. She's already been punished for her disrespect.. She's a "little girl" he shouldn't be so cruel to that type of sub.

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