All Comments on 'Making Mother My Slut Pt. 03'

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camo1980camo1980over 9 years ago

Another good chapter, I hope you continue!

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 9 years ago
Establishing Dominance

This isn't just about sex with Dickie, it's about power and Dominance. Dickie will have to establish his direct dominance over his Dad. And that will probably involve Dad worshiping Dickie's cock too, sucking him off and maybe even being fucked by him. It will be Moana's idea. Maybe Moana will buy a strap-on to dominate Dad's ass first. Imagine a perverse train. Dad fucks Kip, while Mom takes Dad's ass, while Dickie fucks Mom! And Dickie is the ringmaster into a deeper and darker decent into perversion. Just some suggestions for this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more

Please bring Kim over to Moana house where you can talk to him about his mom-- and have him follow your lead every where you touch your mom, ending up in the yard with a small campfire , where you ultiminately tell Kim no more panties and throw hers on the fire.

Excellent writing.

strictmaster12880SWBstrictmaster12880SWBover 9 years ago
Please don't introduce gay sex!

It'll ruin a great story! Make the dad a cuckold instead, so he isn't allowed to fuck either of them! :)

hornyman169hornyman169over 9 years ago
The Power

Dicky needs to be the top dog in the house and James the bottom. Dicky needs to fuck Moana and Kip in front of James and then order James to lick them clean. James will need Dicky's permission to do anything.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 9 years ago
Gay Sex! Horrors! LOL

It makes me laugh when people say that "Gay Sex" would ruin this story, when the mother and daughter have already been having sex. I hate to tell you this, but that is GAY SEX! The story should go where the characters take it, and not be steered by homophobia.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
cheating /spying

would love a story where husband(father)/daughter have affair behind wife/moms back her so unaware detailed how the get away with it and story where dad/sis think they are getting away with it but the son/brother aware and say nothing about it

carol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
keep it going

chap 3 was better than 4... But keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
sis your pussy belong too dad

who did mom pussy belong too.good story but,b/s..

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Why would anyone want to leave the house?

I'd be fucking my hot sister Kip too! Those big tits, and areolas, would turn me on so much, I'd have to fuck the shit out of her. Since dad has a little dick in caparison, I'm sure her pussy would be so tight!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LAZY, CARELESS, OR IGNORANT - YOU CHOOSE!!

Football (football)

down stairs (downstairs)

aureola (areola)

young ones face(->) Telling (one’s) (telling)

Mommy's (mommy's )

Mommy (mommy )

Dad (dad)

Mom (mom)

Daddy (daddy)

brothers (brother’s)

Dads (dad’s)

I love you soft ass (your)

She stammer, hesitated (stammered)

beat them(->) Damn

what ever (whatever)

up stairs (upstairs)

could gram my video (grab)

I pus on (put)

half way (halfway)

laying flat (lying)

sisters (sisters)

mothers (mother’s)

Father (father)

video taping (videotaping)

girls (girl’s)

site of my father (sight)

driving he deep (it)

what ever (whatever)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Kip

Oh god I wanted Dicky to fuck Kip so bad! The mom sounds hot but the way you described Kip made me hard as a rock. Please let him make her his big titted cock slut.

DEvilLoynisDEvilLoynisover 7 years ago
Re Kip

The problem is that if he does she's not going to want her dad's puny dick anymore.

hardwood26hardwood26about 7 years ago
perfect ending

everyone is happy. perfect arrangement

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not so sure

Hmm kinda hate the whole sharing thing I would have liked if the son took over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it!!!!!

I hope you have another chapter where the son not only knocks-up his mother, but his sister also. And maybe make his father his faggot and only lets him just get his daughter to suck his wimpy dicklet while being fucked as his wife whips his ass!

MstrPussyEaterMstrPussyEaterabout 3 years ago

Next Daddy gets cuckolded or has to watch son take both women and Dicky gets John to fuck his mom Kim as he has already been fucking his sister too. Or like I would like sis becomes Dicky's sub also

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