All Comments on 'Making Shemales'

Needs hell of a lot of editing. Pull it, fix it, and come back.

Re read and run a grammar checker, please

And things went downhill from there. Badly done. Get an editor.

Undeveloped, stream of consciousness fantasy

Please continue writing... slow down and let it flow

A promising start and a good one for a new author.

Don't be put off by "Anonymous" critics there is some good stuff here and you should be encouraged to continue with the good work you have started.

Well done.

Please continue this great story. We want to see that transformation, with all the juicy details and xxxx!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

xoxo ......pam

Wow! I want to be that bitch! Can't wait to read more!

Yeesss pleaaasse!! Turn him into a sissy too!! No man can resist that, being turned into a sissy girl, it's the greatest pleasure in the world! He will resist at first, then come to like it and then be totally obsessed with being a nice obedient sissy slut!

Very hot! This has always been a fantasy of nine!

I wish it could really happen

Exciting hot story. I love it when shemales turn men into their bitches. Shemales will rule the world