All Comments on 'Making You Mine'

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YJimenezYJimenezalmost 7 years ago
Beautiful

A beautiful story of (forbidden) love. But I can feel the intensity of the love they had for each other especially the woman for her man. I can empathise and I can feel how much she wanted it! How much she wanted to be impregnated by him, to carry his son... Because I do feel such intense feelings but alas, things are just not meant to be. But I'm really happy that someone had written such a beautiful story that perhaps, in another lifetime would be my life with my madrileño... 😢

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Gross cheating

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