by Elecebra
GOD DAMMIT I HATE WAITING FOR THINGS BECAUSE I'M IMPATIENT but these are great, good job and keep up the good work!
Please don't stop writing these. I love this story and your writing.
Argh. The parchment and the fax at the end of chapter 2. Would you believe I'd forgotten all about them? I'm just reading this for the gratuitous sex.
Loving this series so far. I hope the next chapter isn't too long a wait. Really looking forward to it.
I'm getting bored with all the fucking and sucking while the plot moves at a glacial pace. The sex is nice, but I'm here for the story. Please consider providing more plot movement in each chapter. Thanks for writing. Except for the tortuously slow story, I'm enjoying it.
Story incomplete and inactive. More than a year since last installment.
"every hard thrust hit her like a cock-shaped meteor."
Perfect.
Wonderful fun.
But for pity’s sake, more development/change of Eric’s character, or at least faster!