All Comments on 'Malcubus Ch. 10: Things He Forgot'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Favorite so far!

But I love them all keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

GOD DAMMIT I HATE WAITING FOR THINGS BECAUSE I'M IMPATIENT but these are great, good job and keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Don't stop

Please don't stop writing these. I love this story and your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
There's a plot?

Argh. The parchment and the fax at the end of chapter 2. Would you believe I'd forgotten all about them? I'm just reading this for the gratuitous sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love this series.

Loving this series so far. I hope the next chapter isn't too long a wait. Really looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More plot!

I'm getting bored with all the fucking and sucking while the plot moves at a glacial pace. The sex is nice, but I'm here for the story. Please consider providing more plot movement in each chapter. Thanks for writing. Except for the tortuously slow story, I'm enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Next chapter?

Any idea when the next chapter will be finished?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Incomplete and inactive

Story incomplete and inactive. More than a year since last installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fuck yes!

This story is amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That's How You Turn A Phrase

"every hard thrust hit her like a cock-shaped meteor."

Perfect.

OblimoOblimoabout 6 years ago

Wonderful fun.

But for pity’s sake, more development/change of Eric’s character, or at least faster!

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