All Comments on 'Man Behind the Mask'

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26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

If youse ain't sho then youse a ho.

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 7 years ago
Loving Husband?

What is it with this men in this stories. Seems they´re not happy unless somebody else is getting in their wifeś. Also what about the women ? Don´t they know the word No!!? Or asking? before procedding? Hope you have something better than this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good story!

maybe a bit questionable as to where the end is but i feel it all plays along with the mysterious theme

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieover 13 years ago
Too many unanswered questions

What happened at the end? Was it a police raid? And it felt like she gave in to lust far too easily for a recently married woman.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 13 years ago
More

A good story but really no ending.

ChagrinedChagrinedover 13 years ago
Ahhhhhh!

The Salvador Dali of LE!

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 13 years ago
Not much to say about this

Incomplete is the grade I'd give -- duo starro.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
She was wearing a 'brazier'?

No wonder she got hot and bothered.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What was that?

??????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Rambling?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Unnecessarily Mysterious

Interesting story, but truly incomplete at this point.

Mystery and misdirection in stories are fine. But unless you plan a sequel, and then this story should be, "ch. 1," you left too many open plot holes: why did she want sex with a possible stranger so quickly as a 3 week bride, when she easily could have asked him a question to hear his voice? Why was the session so abruptly ended with a horn? Why the elaborate costumes for only a very few minutes? Why an armored car? etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Language

Boring story, (ma) chérie

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Spell check strikes again

Don't you think it would be a little uncomfortable (not to mention unsexy) to wear a brazier?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What?

???????????

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I enjoyed it

And, Alice.

hansbwlhansbwlover 13 years ago
Mystery

One thing for certain, it was not Jacques!!

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 13 years ago
can I please

have the 5 minutes back I wasted reading this crap?

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfover 13 years ago
Good mystery

I liked it, thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WTF

What was that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WTF?

WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Is this Part 1?

It was kind of dumb. Well written, but dumb.

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