All Comments on 'Man Fucked by Mannequins'

WTF you dint just say "horrible dialogue" and expect not to offend. Anon number two that was NOT criticism but a really un constrcuctive reply to the story. If my tutor gave me that feedback I would call him out in it because it does not help at all.

I give it 5 stars for the rude replies by the first anons.

Just real a few of the stories here and get the scence in writing out the sexy sceen cuz this can be a realy hot story

wow that's wildly crazy! like a horny man wrote this! you do know some people get turned on by dirty dialogue like this, don't you. mmm..

Anyway there's confusing part of which the POV suddenly sounded like turned to reader's POV (p20) ?

Beutiful I would loved to be raped like this

What a great adventure. I would have loved to be watching this mmm