All Comments on 'Manipulating Her Mind Ch. 01'

No. Do not trust him. He is not much of a dom, just a randy young goat. His poor situational awareness isn't sexy. He puts them both in danger of any one with bad intent in the park.

No, way. You are a jerk.

Can you stop the whining? I think its sexy as hell and got me turned on like hell. Im curious for the next chapter!

and a fag!! Gave this story a 5!

NOT! A poorly told story about a Dom wanna be abusing a young girl. Nothing sexy or erotic in the telling. He was not a good character. I just felt sorry for her. Not good.

Waiting for the next chapter!!

I am the author of this story. Thank you everyone for the positive feedback. I have part 2 submitted waiting for approval. Personally I think this story is amazing. I'll be glad to comment right here when it get's approved so you can continue. I assure you this story gets more and more exciting.

It's kind of a bummer that some don't like the story and like to make huge character judgments as a result. For you please don't forget what website you are on. You are judging more based on what your personal interests are and closing your mind on what can be exciting for others.

Had my undivided attention , a different read from most Bdsm stories I've read he isn't overly dominating.

Fuck I need more

This story is great! Just because some want heavy handed doms, it doesn't mean everyone does. Loved the fantasy of this happening...the first chapter in her fantasy coming true, becoming a sub for her sexy master.

Mmmmmm god... Got me all worked up

God yes my own sub side is on over drive. More please Master.