All Comments on 'Mankind Survives Nuclear War'

Please, never write again.

Hi. Just thought I would leave a brief note. It's a good start, but there's little to no emotion involved between the what your character's do, and what happens to them or between them. So, for example, when Olga discovers her work is being shredded, she has little reaction. The same when her boyfriend, one assumes entire family and world are destroyed, she has the same reaction as if she had a small hang nail. If you are interested in continuing, go find a copy of "Save the Cat". Dumb name, but an excellent book on story type and structure that can be read in half of a day. Also, check out some of the following stories

The God of Lies and Mischief by FireFaery

https://www.literotica.com/s/god-of-mischief-and-lies - Loki the Norse God, finds something he can't control. Perhaps one of the best written stories on this site and just a little over 3 1/2 pages.

A god called Bruce by TaleMaster - Great take on the gods of Olympus

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-god-called-bruce-pt-01

Upon a savage shore by RipperFish

https://www.literotica.com/s/upon-a-savage-shore-ch-01

Sable and the Supers by Falcinator

https://www.literotica.com/s/sable-and-the-supers - Great take on super heroes.

And if you're interested, look up "The Pro" on YouTube

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFS9n7_-5oo&t=95s

Best of luck...

as old and dry as the old general. this had the potential to be more colourful and interesting to read

Would not be surprised this was an actual Cold War program in old Soviet Russia.