by andrewdavis
Unless your HyperDan from hentai foundry this isn't your story to begin with ill be letting him know about this.
You said she wasn't using a urinal with her fat cock....but she was in the girls bathroom so there shouldn't be a urinal anywhere so it shouldn't even come into the story....
It seems pretty clear that your writing is not super high quality. I don't mean to be a dick about it, but that's the simple truth and somebody has to tell you. I do hope you improve, though. Start out by trying to imitate other stories here and get a feel for how they're written. Don't give up!