All Comments on 'Marie's Submission Ch. 01'

by jakeball69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Rock Hard

Fantastic storyline! Had me Rock Hard from start to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

that was a damn good story. Very well layed out. I hope You plan to continue this. I am curious if He will be the Master of both

MastersallMastersallover 19 years ago
OVER THE TOP .. BUT HOT !!!!!

GREAT TWIST AND HOT AND FUN.. DO AGREE WITH THE OTHER REVEIEW THAT YOU HAVE TO REIGN IN THE DAUGHTER'S BEHAVIOR

BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT INSTALLMENT

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not again?

Wrong Damn catagory again, I am getting tired of the mis-labels. Should be in BDSM!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Outstanding!!!

Can't wait to read Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Diamond in the making

Brick Hard, In the beginning you should have had paige tell her mother pull her panties down and let him fuck her in the ass while she suck her pussy

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