All Comments on 'Marion's in Love'

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max052max052almost 10 years ago
Quite good

Liked the way it ended but could have used more/longer/more descriptive sex scenes but I guess this was more about the emotions, which I like. I'll read more of your submissions, I hope they're as good. Thanks for a fine read.

max052

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