All Comments on 'Mark to Mary Ch. 02'

where's the proper punctuation....like quotes when a character is actually saying something?

Seriously, WTF?

would love to be your maid ,

i t turned me on big time i want to be there

But this story was very boring. Your sentences, ran together which made it very hard to read. If You write again please use more spacing.

When Your Mistress's spoke you forgot Quotation marks at the beginning and end of their speech paths.

I am surprised that the editors let this story slip past them for these Literotica infractions.