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All Comments on 'Marly's First Convention'

by WildeDream

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Quite a trip!

Well written! vivid and intriguing, extremly erotic!

Great job!

plussevenplussevenover 17 years ago
Well Done

Not a category I typically enjoy, but I really enjoyed this one. Good read and very erotic.

FyrstarFyrstarover 17 years ago
Interesting

I'll give this a lukewarm for a short ending and unplausible scenario. No thought of her husband during this, and the abrupt ending was a bit strange.

sirhugssirhugsover 17 years ago
This story has been reviewed

on the Author's Hangout on Lit Forums

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901&page=13&pp=25

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
She left home ready to be a slut and she is one

Who would want to even have a piece of some shit like her. She has no character, no morals, and no brain. A pure out and out slut fuck.

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