All Comments on 'Martin's Halloween Nightmare'

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BJGoodheadBJGoodheadover 7 years ago
Excellent premise

I haven't seen a new chapter of The Marriage of Martin Hastings stories in a long time. this is an excellent premise and I think should be made into part of the actual series rather than a standalone writing exercise. It would be easy to imagine this story as written describing a nervous breakdown he experiences due to his terrible circumstances.

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It’s not a dream martin

It would have been great if Martin woke up next to his wife with all the dried cum in his hair , then his wife tells him he was the hit of the party and he has another party to go to dressed like the queen of England and perform as he did the night before

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

your stories are starting to get boring to bad i thought you had a good thing going but it is getting sick maybe someday you will learn how to write

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Too many dreams, the dream device is being used too often IMO

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 3 years ago

Great Story! Maetin Was Not Sure About The Good Time He Had; But, I Purely Enjoyed It! Write More ;Martin; Tales!!!!

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