All Comments on 'Mary and her Lovers Ch. 05'

As a non-cuck I have a hard time getting into all the deliberate sharing stuff, but there is no denying that you're a good writer, and the juicy parts of the tale are well crafted and a good read. So you get good marks from me.

Please, don't do it

I can understand not liking something. But if you are reading Chapter 05 you gotta have a clue about the story. So why does someone read a story that they know they are going to hate? Masochistic? Or just plain fucking stupid? Why do they demand a stop to the story? I am sure that there are thousands of stories here that I would (or do in a few cases when I tried to read them) hate. But I feel no need to comment on stories I don't like and even less to feel a need to insist that an author should stop writing a particular genre. Book burning next? I feel those guys say far more about themselves than they really mean to...Roy Cohn and his thoughts on gays maybe. Anyway...write on if your muse demands it and have fun.