All Comments on 'Mary Lou and Steven'

I think this is more appropriately categorized in Interracial rather than Loving Wives. Most of the emphasis was on interracial encounter(s), so that's what comes to mind (you know, enormous dick, unmatched staying power, etc. etc. etc.). While this story ends happily ever after (I think), the reality is that Mary Lou's and Steven's relationship is changed for good. Also hard to believe they would not want another cool quarter million (or more) for just one more session . . .

Whether interracial or LW - poorly written and once a cheater, always a cheater. Sure, your plot device was a committed affair - over used and so not plausible. No matter how the author disguises dog shit, it is still dog shit. Debra & Wayne

I will not bother you again.

To put your stories in interracial, but either way I'll skip them.

No double entendre implied dear author. I like this series a lot and was slightly disappointed when mami did not return for seconds but all is well with dear sister appearing in the next story. Thanks for the read and looking forward to the next one.

... The Epilogue felt abrupt.

.....culminating point of the story is their renewal of love, NOT some BBC submission of hers than the category is absolutely appropriate. Plus there was far more written about their relationship than the stud sex. Thanks for having them make a break and Ryan act rationally, much more believable.

Cuckold+whorebitch+niggerfucking+skank+whorenotdead+sickfuckedupwriter=1*

your stories about mary lou were exetremely good. i would like to see if mary lou in the .will submit to ryan

This couple has little chance of remaining together. He will always remember her mating with the younger, more virile and better endowed young man. He cannot forget that she clearly enjoyed sex that weekend more than she ever had before or since. She will never forget that her husband convinced her to allow a stranger to use her 3 holes for his pleasure while others enjoyed watching her progressive debasement. Memories of her drug enhanced pleasure that weekend, aside from the anal encounter, will taint her enjoyment of sexual intimacy with her older and less virile husband who wanted his wife fucked by another man.

Hope they are enjoying the money. There's really no reason she should retire from whoredom. Her cunt is now a proven cash cow.

That was really awful , both writing and the story you told.

Ugh. Derp derp.

Full of racial stereotypes. No thank you.