All Comments on 'Mary's Challenge, Day 02'

by Jappio

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Advice_GirlAdvice_Girlalmost 11 years ago
Wow such an unusual story but it really affected me,

I would not have believed that this could have be such an erotic read. It brings back memories of semi-forced exposures that I have endured for husbands and boy friends. But I never expected that being exposed to only women would be so erotic. Love both parts.

Very good story.

AG.

fitntrimfitntrimover 9 years ago
awesome

love this...very hot!

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago
Nicely written.

I think I have one more chapter. Something like this is what I imagine girls engaging in when the boys are away. I enjoyed the modesty and the desire to continue, evan though I thought she would put a stop to her adventure. The travel to Sallys and being discovered in the pool by another was wonderfully described, just enough information was given to keep Mary included. Girls love the fantasy.

Good writting, Thank You for a wonderful read.

fitntrimfitntrimover 6 years ago
read it again because I love this story

ohhh how I love this! more!

TrueMortTrueMortabout 6 years ago
Possibly the best

One of this series. I absolutely loved the end section.

You really write amazing stuff

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