All Comments on 'Massage Parlor Sister'

Excellent story you have wrote here. Hopefully there will be more chapters to come!!

But needed more back story,which hopefully we'll get in next chapter & hopefully ASAP

I knew I read this somewhere else. Now I remember. This author has/had an account at ASSTR. This is just s carbon-copy of the story he posted there.

Not a bad one either. It was too short because there was no backstory like brosismom said.

I loved this erotic story!

Liked this one...the story...the writing...the descriptions...the passion!

This could turn into an Epic series. Hope you continue the plot line.

Missed the mark for me. Sorry

Kind of so so for me, didnt really get me into it.

I liked it. Good story and it was something different. Keep adding on to the story.

this was a sweet story. belirvable to as some of what happened was the same as my real like and brought back bitter sweet memeries of standing up to my dad but i believe he respected me for what i did and it actualy brought us closer. thanks for a good story and memeries. 5 stars.

BUT...I didn't like the whore line or the shaved pussy. I prefer a woman not a pre-puberty little girl. men are wimps today, even women are complaining that there are no real men around anymore...

Yes Anonymous 5 stars I (don't) agree. Characters in stories should be more like each and every reader wants them. Guess we'll have to wait on the next generation of authors who can write a dynamic story that automatically fits the readers preferences.

Personally I find immersions in pubic hair to be disturbing and relishes embellishments of some other topics to be captivating. Go search Hairslut and leave The Bald Beaver to its handlers.

So would you prefer a world full of "real men and women" where stories like this are burned with the author on top? (Only mentally ill reads/writes erotica and incest erotica is unredeemably depraved, right?)

Loved every word, Five stars and added to favorites!

What a great story, such a shame there wasn’t anymore of their future told to us.

But still, 5/5. And kept as a favourite

It works really well. Perfect story.

Pathetic. Your writing was amateurish at best. Your characters boring and two dimensional. Two stars.

veryreal, very good