All Comments on 'Master Always Wants More'

I think your writing is very exciting. This is the outline of a whole novel that you could write, as rich in detail as your Gorean stories. Take each week and expand it to a whole chapter.

I concur with the previous comment. This is a fast-forward look at a relationship and a subculture that deserves to luxuriate in details. More dialogue, character exposition and lingering senusality would serve this story even better.

This is an excellent beginning, and I look forward to more of your work. I wish you well.