All Comments on 'Master Comes Home'

by brkmrevrgn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You need to keep in focus.

Like one minute you say you always sleep nude and the next he is pulling off your sweatshirt in bed....??

KandiikissesKandiikissesover 13 years ago
Good

Don't listen to the persons comment below they obviously didn't read the story very well if they didn't understand that concept. I really like this story i think you've got a really good balance.

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