All Comments on 'Master Controller 3.07, beta'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

What's the point of this? Are you trying to set this up for a story? In which case, I would have waited until I had the first chapter of the actual story completed, and released the two together. MasterPC stories can be fun, and I personally wish more people would write them, though maybe updated for the smartphone era, but this just seems needlessly pointless in the absence of any actual story. Especially since this is an erotica website.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I like the story as is

Master PC in government hands is scary stuff. Perfect place to end it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
You Are Hereby Authorized to proceed with Testing.

Required actions. 1. Full completion of the story. 2. At least Bi weekly updates on the testing. 3. Acceptance of Positive Feedback from those who review the updates.

MC manager in absentia. Dick SloCum.

pocketrocketpocketrocketalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

This is a one-off story.

Master PC in government hands, as one poster put it, will end the world as we know it. The story reveals a glimpse of the activity just before the world radically changes.

PR

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