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As I stood in my hallway counting, I realized there was almost $800 in that envelope. I seriously considered taking Kate's advice...
Thank you for reading the first of what I hope to be a nine part series.
I will make one apology to the ladies. I know my female characters are highly sexualized nymphomaniacs, but that is what men fantasize about.
To anyone who wishes to provide some constructive criticism, I'd like to hear from you, but please do not send me anything concerning poor wrestling tactics, or the shoddy economic models I've used, I don't really care.
That being said, stay tuned for "Match #2: David vs Madison"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI love this concept. Really hot and really interesting. Never thought of anything like this, but it is a winner for me. Don't stop this series.
Anonymousover 11 years agoCame across this last night ... liked it a great deal. One of the best I've seen on this subject.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe cock vs pussy orgasm battle is a huge fetish of mine. The cock is usually weaker and cums more easily (unless the girl is REALLY horny) but this kinda makes the man the underdog in these competitions, which is cool.
I prefer the woman to be trimmed or shaven, so the bush didn't really do anything for me, but that's perfectly fine if you like bushes. I also wouldn't mind some light to moderate ballbusting/lowblows in some of the stories (maybe some of the matches have different/special rules?)
I also like the humiliation aspect to your story, the woman taunts him for losing to a girl and teases him while hes cumming. I do LOVE how she denied/runied his orgasm in the first 2 rounds so he would be weaker for the final one. Very creative. (Pre-cum, however, should not count as cumming or the guy would never win)
Anyway, good job, keep up the good work
Oh and check out the "Boots and Birthday Suits" story, which does a similar theme to yours and is very well written
tascam05over 12 years agoWell done. I liked this story, but then this is a fantasy niche of mine, so I am bound to have a positive bias. That being said, I think this is a good start. I have not found many stories about mixed, nude wrestling. In my fantasy, role play is used to suspend disbelief. By making this 'real' you have given the story a boost I like. However, this requires a lot of set-up. By that I mean explanations, movtivations, rules ect. I got a bit lost. But for the quality of the story and your writing, I find it worth the effort. I look forward to more.
Anonymousover 12 years agoPre-cum counting as an orgasm is kind of ridiculous. If David is supposed to not be an idiot, he should really have figured out by now that joining this organization is basically giving away money to his opponents.
(Unless you're going to actually have him win matches sometimes. But given this setup, I just can't see it.)
