All Comments on 'Matrimony with Mother & Her Sister'

not a bad story.

you do need an editor, and this story should be in the incest category not loving wives.

thank you for your effert

Looking to the writer's historical, a question arises: Why "Surrogate Mother-in-Law becomes Wife" is in Incest/Taboo and this one with a mother and aunt is in LW? I didn't read the story, just the title.

Why not write a story about a Sister In Law, or a Mother In Law who fucks, or falls in love, with or marries their Brother In Law, or Son In Law, or something? You know, try something you haven't done before.

Oh, wait, that's the description of pretty much every story you've posted since you started posting.

Stretch your wings, man. To paraphrase a Pink Floyd song: you're "running over the same old ground".

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incest and or fetish, so few involved realize they are in fetish lifestyles

Its obviously not English.

you've written a beautiful story with a lot of love and feeling....the only detraction was your grammar and spelling....keep up the good work but get an editor to help with your shortcommings george

1. You need a better command of the English language.

2. You need to write smoothly. You wound up repeating yourself in later paragraphs.

3. It is definitely in the wrong section. Yes, they, according to the story, got married. But the were still his mother and aunt. It should have been put in Incest/Taboo.

3 stars because I liked the story, but it was hard to read.

Needs to be in incest. Polygamy is still illegal in all states.

I think its time Laurel and her cohorts got rid of ALL categories, because her OWN guidelines don't mean jack shit to her, none of the stories posted lately belong where she allows them to be posted.

Wierd

This was written to remove the erotic excitement out of the story. The most boring story about incest I have ever seen on this site. Gave it 2*s.

Anyway, thanks jackjill8.

AMerryman

Try putting this shit in INCEST someone there might like it.

PLEASE, stop "writing".

*Yeah great story!**

* sarcasm on

** sarcasm off

Such a grammatically incorrect piece........

The only flaw is a comfortable use of casual English. No one speaks using the language written here.

Hello All. What are you all grudging? The writing style? Who set the rules here?

My mum and aunt live with me both had three kids each from me both on their 4th pregnancy