All Comments on 'Mature Woman New Job for Family Ch. 02'

Interesting story of a potential seduction, you should definitely keep on with the story.

I wish to see the further

development of this very interesting story

Keep on writing. The tension and development is agonizing, but that's what makes this office seduction so good. The loss of her husband's touches and affection and the boss's taking his place is going well.

Still some word and punctuation problems, but not near as many as in Ch.1.

4 *'s

Pretty good. The home life and stress taking care of invalid husband is getting short shrift. The struggling business subplot could be briefly advanced as boss gets progressively more handsy. But I appreciate how that aspect is playing out over a series of encounters. Looking forward to next installment.

Liking the slow build, looking forward to the down and dirty.

Story good, and development appreciated but could use an edit review..

All comments have been reasonable but it is odd that none have contributed any stories of their own.

Super story develpoment, apart from, and this is only personal preference, I disliked the ominous way the other managers treated her. Would they really impinge on the Boss's secretary. Would they have treated her predecessor in that way.

I await the next chapter.

Deliciously erotic!!!

I am enjoying the story. Looking forward to next installment.

Liking the story but needing to move on a little quicker. .. . .. I think Lyds needs a good fuck.

Great story. Slow teasing and build up is best. Maybe getting the boss and other male staff to starting pushing her to wear brighter lipstick. Than some references by boss and others about her CSL's. You can have lots of fun and produce a riveting tension filled buildup.

Older married women are VERY VERY good in bed!

I really loved this story, gave it a 5-

PS the scene when James massages her is PRICELESS!

:-)

Deliciously erotic? That anonymous bitch must be gay.