All Comments on 'Maureen's Abduction'

This was great but too short. Where's part 2? We need more!

very hot

this is my favorite style of story and you wrote it very well please continue to write

A very good story with excellect characters, plenty of action, fast paced, plenty of suspense and well crafted. Looking forward to future installments.

Very fine writing, I love it so far. Great skill in building the story, can't wait to read the next chapter!

See, this is how you do an abduction-rape-slave story. None of that "she was actually a super-submissive slut all along" bullshit. At least not yet. There's violence, a credible threat of death, and the victim wants to escape, she forces herself to embrace the role in order to survive. That's how you do it, ladies and gentlemen. Let's hope the author can keep up the good work and not do a "Slaves can escape but don't because 100% of them are 100% broken 100% of the time.".