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by sexyone4vr

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hansbwlhansbwlabout 15 years ago
No story line.

Sorry, badly written and completely waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A stream of sexual consciousness...

from a writer who obviously has some talent. I'd be interested in knowing exactly what the "popping candy" is and how it affects one's sensations. An explanation from the author, perhaps?

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