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Click hereI almost panicked to be honest. I really, really, really had to believe that Max would not hurt me. And he came through. He knew exactly how to get me ready, get me turned on, keep me turned on, and make sure that I had a good experience. Plus he used A LOT OF LUBE.
In addition, he took things very, very slow. His machine was almost agonizingly slow to be honest, and Max set it to make VERY slow progress in terms of depth of penetration. That allowed me to stretch out slowly, getting used to the girth of the whole thing as it proceeded forward inch by inch. Also, if you look through the story, I don't think I was penetrated completely more than 3 or 4 times by the Fist. Honestly, that was more than enough!
The electric box he used was also set to deliver no more than a light shock to my nipples. The variation in the length of shock and in the timing was a turn on all alone. So it wasn't painful. More like a shock from static electricity, or as I mention, sticking your tongue on a 9Volt batter. Just sustained. Whew!
Back to the Fist. The feeling of having something that big penetrating me was incredible. Not painful exactly, but not totally comfortable, and those physical feelings mixed with my swirling emotions and other more pleasurable physical sensations to make the whole experience really pretty mind blowing. My orgasms were sharp, intense, and seemed to last forever.
I would also say that my breaking down into sobs toward the end was not a negative thing. It felt exactly like what people experience when they burst into tears or laughter immediately after an intense sexual experience. That's what is was for me, a total, complete release. The whole thing was just very, very intense.
Finally, just for the ladies. I was very concerned about, well, being TOO stretched out. Now I can safely say from experience that our lady parts are pretty remarkable, and they recover quite well!!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoI see that this was written a long time ago. I'm bummed that there isn't more. I agree with the comments about consent. I'm glad that you addressed that. Max is a delightful character. I'd love to read more with both of them. Maybe a demo at a convention or a dinner party with his friends watching Kristen with the machine.
Anonymousalmost 4 years ago"Just wait until you see what I have planned for NEXT time."
Are you planning to write Chapter 3? Please? If not, did you have any ideas for it? The first two stories are mind-blowingly erotic!
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liz33ndover 6 years agowe need part three, this had to be extremely intense and exhilarating.
JJMemaw0623almost 7 years agoI can understand you wondering whether your parts would even go back to normal after! This had me hot and bothered. I absolutely loved it!!
SecretHowlover 7 years agoAuthor1. I really don't mind negative comments from those who don't like the story or writing style - I like to hear what people think! The comment about the Holland Tunnel cracked me up! That's a valid point - NO man could have followed that and had anywhere near a snug fit! It made me a bit nervous to be honest, but, well things recovered!
2.I agree that Max crossed a line that we had NOT discussed prior to his actions. I DID talk to him before I left. We worked it out - he was VERY apologetic.
The comment about liking being forced a bit at times WAS a bit, well, forced. I went back and read that section, and it was NOT well done.
Anyway - that's for the feedback! Just hearing from people is encouraging. I hope my ability to put my experiences into words is getting better, but I'm a sexual adventurer not a poet!
Anonymousover 7 years agoHaving him play fast and loose with consent and taking away her communication put a dent in his trustworthiness. The throw away statement about liking to be forced was, well, forced. Using the great orgasms justification was a wee bit trite. I'd surely rethink a return visit without a serious discussion.
That issue aside, the descriptions were excellent. The care he showed during and after was nice. You decreased the detachment between them this chapter. There's much an impotent man can personally do. I'm wondering how involved he will become over time. (And if he's truly impotent)
Anonymousover 7 years agoI'll never understand why people read stuff they don't like. I thought it was well written, and a wild experience if really true!
Large toys are incredible, and I agree with Kirsten. Our lady parts DO recover very well! I look forward to future stories.
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhat a lucky girl to find such a nice old man, however, having read some of your previous postings, I would have thought that you would have been well-versed in the pleasures of being fisted. I do hope you are planing on return visits, nothing but nothing gives you as good an orgasm as a good fisting, except perhaps to pull a train.
spankfunforover 7 years agoTrust is very important and Max earned it! The electric nipple machine is impressive! The Fist is very important! Her Climax's Were Well-Described Great Story!
